Caris Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 I've been touching up my CV today as I've been having pretty poor luck on the whole job hunting thing. But I'm still not really happy with it, I'm fine with the first page which has my qualifications, work experience etc on. The second page though, is a different story. There is nothing in particular I don't like, I just have a feeling it could be better. So if anyone has any input it would be greatly appreciated. Here it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EEVILMURRAY Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 The interests bit make me feel a little concerned. Your currently reading, it feels that you’ll constantly be changing it to reflect what you’re reading which screams desperation and that you’re trying to brag somehow. Also depending on whoever you’re applying to, whoever reads it could dislike what you’re reading, which may impact their response. And the “I have been producing video” doesn’t seem to make sense. Video what? Games, consoles, VHS? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoogleViper Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 I'd get rid of the interests section completely. I've never understood that. The employer doesn't care if you are into the LOTR or enjoy going to concerts. Don't just list things, show what you have got from it and how it makes you a better person/more suitable for the job. If you can't think how it does then it doesn't belong in your CV. This is quite helpful. http://www.kent.ac.uk/careers/cv/goodbadCV.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 I'd make it unugly. Looks count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoogleViper Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 Also get rid of those ridiculous bullet points and make the text black (who do you think you are? Daft?). And there's no need to put the references bit in. They won't be wanting them at the CV stage, and if they want them, they'll ask for them. And make the layout much neater (or as Daft says, "unugly"). At the minute it looks like you've just typed it out in word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuk Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 you've also got too many I's me's mine's etc try and limit the amount of times you use them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 As everybody has said, scrap the reading part altogether. If I was an employer, I couldn't care if you were reading Lord of the Rings or Spot the Dog...unless you were looking for work in Waterstones but even so, just put that you like to read books. Other than that, I can't see any problems... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 I'd make it unugly. Looks count. you've also got too many I's me's mine's etc try and limit the amount of times you use them. These two are the big ones for me. It doesn't look very nice at all, I'm guessing the lines down the side are just layout things but the font/bullet points really do nothing for me. A CV should be third person, I'd get rid of all of the I's, me's etc. Your skills should be a very basic list, or else you need to show why you have these skills. You could write all sorts of things as skills, if there's no backup to it then why should anyone believe you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tapedeck Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 (edited) Caris, I see thousands of CV's a year and do this for a living. I would recommend starting with the following: Remove the fancy bullet points. Consistency is key. Also, you are using bullet points with large amounts of text. I would therefore remove the bullet points all together or reduce what you are trying to say. Third person as others have rightly pointed out. Though I find this this not to be a massive issue. 'Interests' should go if you have plenty of other work-related experiences to talk about. Talk about how you can benefit a company. A CV gets you the interview, not the job. Talk about the things you have improved in other companies, what you can bring etc... Mention your SKILLS and demonstrate where you have applied them and any outcomes this has produced. CV's are becoming more skills focused. If you're unsure use something like jobs4u and look for skills and personal qualities in jobs you've previously done. Finally, ALWAYS have references. An employer will rarely 'seek' them out even if they are available upon request. This can be make or break. I've seen long term unemployed people change this one facet and change their lives. Also, why have your skills/strengths hidden on the second page? They should follow a personal profile/personal information section. Sell yourself swiftly. If you are applying for a particular job use a person spec in your skills/strengths field to look tailor made for the job. If there's no person spec use the job description and match it as much as possible. Remember, it could just be an office temp ticking a checklist against a person spec that is getting you the interview. If the company has put info out there - mimic it. Simple yet super effective. Also - for anyone job seeking, go see a Next Step adviser. It's free and they can actually help you get you back into work and get you setting your goals (and your life changes) faster and more effectively than a job seekers adviser ever will. They also offer CV support. Your local college/job centre should have one. Up to you though but the support is there and it's free. Edited February 18, 2011 by tapedeck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caris Posted February 18, 2011 Author Share Posted February 18, 2011 Yeah cool, cheers for the advice. The text is black by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cube Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 It also needs to be a bit more eye-catching. Nothing fancy. Perhaps a line across the page at the top of bottom with "Curriculum Vitae | Name Here" on the top left (above the line) and bottom right (below the line). Use tables for stuff like qualifications with the header with a grey background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoogleViper Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 It also needs to be a bit more eye-catching. Nothing fancy. Perhaps a line across the page at the top of bottom with "Curriculum Vitae | Name Here" on the top left (above the line) and bottom right (below the line). Use tables for stuff like qualifications with the header with a grey background. I don't see the point in writing Curriculum Vitae. They know what it is. When you buy a book you don't see "Book" written across it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Emblem Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 (edited) I don't see the point in writing Curriculum Vitae. They know what it is. When you buy a book you don't see "Book" written across it. Yeah, it won't help adding Curriculum Vitae on it. Also a good thing to do is make a different CV for different sectors you apply for, it's key to big yourself up and show what will benefit the company. So have a CV for Web design and a CV for Retail for example. Another thing to do is give an example when you state your strengths, unless you can back it up then your just bragging. Edited February 18, 2011 by Emerald Emblem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cube Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 I don't see the point in writing Curriculum Vitae. They know what it is. When you buy a book you don't see "Book" written across it. It was a suggestion to simply to make it appear more professional. The look of it is important - it's less likely to be skimmed through/thrown aside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Emblem Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 It was a suggestion to simply to make it appear more professional. The look of it is important - it's less likely to be skimmed through/thrown aside. But it makes no difference to the employer if that is put down or not, a CV is about selling your skills to the company. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayseven Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 Tapedeck wins (and should do!) I'd like to give the text some jayseven jizz, if you're willing to copy/paste it. Your first three skills/strengths are useless without any factual reference to base them on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EEVILMURRAY Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 It was a suggestion to simply to make it appear more professional. No, smug is the right term here. "Look! I know what CV stands for! HIRE ME!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dannyboy-the-Dane Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 No, smug is the right term here. "Look! I know what CV stands for! HIRE ME!" So there should be no headline or ...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoogleViper Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 So there should be no headline or ...? His name. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Pretty much what Tapedeck said. Give examples to show that you can do what you have said. When did you form a part of a successful team? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caris Posted February 19, 2011 Author Share Posted February 19, 2011 I've started it from the ground up this morning, everything is wayyyyy better. I'll post it once it's finished, cheers everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxigen_Waste Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Don't mention LOTR after you say you're an avid reader. It's a bit light for that (even if it is a pain to get through some parts). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayseven Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Plus LOTR is actually 6 books :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caris Posted February 19, 2011 Author Share Posted February 19, 2011 Ah, okay. started my CV all over again this morning and just finished the rough draft. Few things to point out, it hasn't had a full spell check, I'm dyslexic so yes it might contain a few grammar errors. Also I will add my references on later today. Last of all I would like to include one more skill so I can have 4 skills and 4 interests. if anyone can think of something be sure to let me know as I'm struggling on this one last thing. I don't know what to add as I've said a lot in my profile at the start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Happenstance Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 How good are your grades? Ive been told that sometimes its best just to list the subjects and not bother with the grades if they arent impressive. Also usually you dont need to put references on a CV. Just write "References available upon request" at the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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