Very intriguing. Great suspense. I like it, and I'd love to read more.
I've always wanted to write a story. It's actually one of my dreams: Write a story, preferably in English.
The thing is: I'm not English and I don't study English.
Is there anyone here who knows some good literature about "How to write"?
I have written several poems (not really good ones, though), but haven't done so in quite some time. I don't think they're good enough to be released here, I won't do it :p