welsh_gamer Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Loved the bit after the credits. Made me laugh out loud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellmeister Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Pretty good, especially after the credits :P nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejay Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Yeah. I didn't like it. Didn't raise a smile. Way too forced and the gags were mostly kinda lame. Ah well, you can't please 'em all. I might try another ep sometime. Keep trying guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 9, 2007 Author Share Posted June 9, 2007 Word. The script for episode 2 is actually better, so hopefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goron_3 Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 It wasn't bad. Thought the theme tune and the ending were hilarious. Speed up the gags and it'll be great. How often we gonna see new eps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calza Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Word. The script for episode 2 is actually better, so hopefully. I'm waiting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairdriver Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 I think its really good for a first try ameteur production. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paj! Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Says the actor. Yeah, the voice acting (except Cannon) needs more emotion and speed of delivery. Also, each ball needs a range of emotions. Dennis seemed to just stare into space and smile. (I still love you, ReZ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EEVILMURRAY Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Waddaya mean? Billio had mounds of emotion in his voice. IT WAS VOCAL GENIUS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cube Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Speed up the speaking a bit. It sounds like you are speaking slowly to make it longer...the slowness is the main poblem. The intro and credits were ace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eenuh Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Like has been said: give the balls some more emotions (so don't just change the mouth but the eyes too; eyebrows come in handy here) and speed everything up a bit so it keeps the viewer's interest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EchoDesiato Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 The pace is a bit slow, but I like it. My favourite part was the acid trip. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 10, 2007 Author Share Posted June 10, 2007 Thanks for the comments guys. Im taking all this on board. They can only get better. Im acquiring Flash, which will hopefully help me if anything. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejay Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Thanks for the comments guys. Im taking all this on board. They can only get better. Im acquiring Flash, which will hopefully help me if anything. Thanks! What did you use for episode 1 if you didn't use flash? And Eenuh is dead on, expression in animation is in the eyes not the mouth. See Gromit for example, no mouth yet endless amounts of expression and characterisation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 10, 2007 Author Share Posted June 10, 2007 Word. I used Windows Movie Maker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retro_Link Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 The end theme was great, I noticed it borrowed from Natasha Beddingfield! Just the same comments as everyone else really, the diaolgue and responses were a bit too slow and more expression is needed. Not bad for a first attempt though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 11, 2007 Author Share Posted June 11, 2007 The end theme was great, I noticed it borrowed from Natasha Beddingfield! Huh? What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retro_Link Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 Huh? What do you mean?The speaking bit at the end of her song "I want to have your babies" is used in your end song, but used the word 'balls' instead. "There's a ball, there's a ball, Oh there's another ball, Balls, balls, balls, balls, balls" If you still don't know what I mean, go to 3:12 in her song, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IOAbvaIVp2c Did you not write the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 11, 2007 Author Share Posted June 11, 2007 The speaking bit at the end of her song "I want to have your babies" is used in your end song, but used the word 'balls' instead. "There's a ball, there's a ball, Oh there's another ball, Balls, balls, balls, balls, balls" If you still don't know what I mean, go to 3:12 in her song, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IOAbvaIVp2c Did you not write the song? No I didnt, my friend did....Ive only heard her song like once...Lolz. Ill have to listen again (When Im at home) Heh heh! May be a new found respect for the song! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Letty Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 Windows Movie maker? Thats quite a feat!! I liked it anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caris Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 Can i play the voice of a ghetto black ball? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 11, 2007 Author Share Posted June 11, 2007 Windows Movie maker? Thats quite a feat!! You're telling me. Lol. Once it was passed about 1 minutes worth of frames, the thing started to crash and freeze every so often, so you had to wait for it to load etc etc. Also when I tried converting it to a movie, it didnt work it was saying "ETA 30 minutes" increasing upto 1000's of minutes, with the % done not moving. Yikes...I actually nearly cried, but luckily it worked. (Then I noticed I spelt Chairs name wrong, and had to do it again! LOL! ) Luckily now I have Flash - But need to learn how to use it. BTW Episode 3 will be your debut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calza Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 What about me? :( :( :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted June 11, 2007 Author Share Posted June 11, 2007 I cant remember who I said some of you will be. Im sorry, lol. Who did I say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tellyn Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 My Balls script is almost finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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