SPAMBOT4000 Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 I was a little bored last night and this morning. Criticism welcome please. I'd rather someone watch and give a scathing review than someone watch and not comment at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paj! Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 You looked really young in the bit with the Easter egg. Also I stopped watching half-way through, but not because it was particularly bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roostophe Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 And now for some actual feedback... That was actually quite amusing. I liked it. Are you sure it wasn't at all influenced by Jam? One thing was the music. Idioteque in the Easter Egg sketch fit well, I thought. Fake Plastic Trees in the car driving bit, maybe not so much, but we couldn't hear it. And Barry White's singing kinda got in the way of your voice in the last sketch. Overall: Not bad. I wouldn't mind seeing more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoogleViper Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 I thought it was pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shining Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Yeah, I liked it aswell. Actually cracked up when you pulled out the anal-whisp. And it's not often I crack up from watching a sketch. Kudos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Yeah as mentioned I loved it. Anal Whisk was pure brilliance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAMBOT4000 Posted March 29, 2010 Author Share Posted March 29, 2010 Thanks folks, kinda surprised by all the positive comments Roostophe, totally agree about Fake Plastic Trees not being right for the sketch. I knew at the time, I was just starting to get bored of editing and couldn't be arsed hunting for the perfect song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramar Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 I actually roared with laughter at parts of that. The anal whisk the end was just as weird as the humping "awoooooooooo" you did for Rez's video thing. But equally if not more funny. The cat bit was the only really unfunny part, and I didn't find the easter egg part too amusing. The rest was top quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MoogleViper Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 The best sketch was the glass sandwich sketch as it wasn't an in your face "I'm gonna tell you a joke, here's the joke" type sketch. Those aren't usually funny. (Take note ReZ). EDIT: Although I think the bit at the end (can't remember exactly) where you said something like "She'll learn to make her own sandwiches) spoiled it somewhat. I think you should have kept it more subtle and just calmy said something like "Sure we have our rows, but so does every couple. We just have a healthy way of dealing with our problems." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimbob Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Pretty decent there, funnier than i expected it to be really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dannyboy-the-Dane Posted March 30, 2010 Share Posted March 30, 2010 This was actually pretty funny. One thing that buggers me - and maybe that's just due to your accent - is that I found some bits hard to hear, like the final point of the sexual fantasies sketch in the car. Still, that's a minor thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guy Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 So, to recap... after I professed my controversial love for Comedy Rainbow, you sent me here and asked me to watch your own production which I now have. I liked this, a lot. Laughed out loud a few times and genuinely think you've got something good going on. Glass sandwich, Sexual Paradise and the outtakes at the end were a really nice touch. Comedy sketches and outtakes go hand in hand. I also think your accent and voices are perfect for comedy. Some people just have the comedy voice and you're one of them. More of these please. Many more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 So, to recap... after I professed my controversial love for Comedy Rainbow, you sent me here and asked me to watch your own production which I now have. I liked this, a lot. Laughed out loud a few times and genuinely think you've got something good going on. Glass sandwich, Sexual Paradise and the outtakes at the end were a really nice touch. Comedy sketches and outtakes go hand in hand. I also think your accent and voices are perfect for comedy. Some people just have the comedy voice and you're one of them. More of these please. Many more. Agreed. Prossilol for tenchar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAMBOT4000 Posted April 16, 2010 Author Share Posted April 16, 2010 Haha well whadyaknow, shameless self promotion DOES work! Thanks very much for your overkind comments and glad you enjoyed it TBH I copied the outtakes idea from Rez as some of the best Comedy Rainbow luls are also outtakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReZourceman Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 I've got an interesting question. What was the creative choice behind calling it Episode 7B? Was it (what I assumed) that this is the latest in a long list of apologies as if you're ashamed, and ....etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAMBOT4000 Posted April 18, 2010 Author Share Posted April 18, 2010 Ahh that would have been a great reason. There's a short dark comedy Chris Morris film called 'My Wrongs: #8245 - 8249 & 117' which is named for that reason. Umm there was no real reason for it to be honest. I just didn't want to call it Episode 1 as an Episode 1 kinda suggests that there will be an Episode 2 and I wasn't sure if I'd ever be bothered making another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayseven Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Radiohead's No Surprises would've been better than fake plastic trees. Outtakes are my favouritest things ever as they are, and they were very good! I enjoyed the whole thing, it didn't get me laughing out loud but I didn't get bored and... yeah, do another one sometime! Sorry, not very constructive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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