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Venom (From Spider-Man)

ReZourceman

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Not bad dude, but I think there's a bit too much thigh going on in both. Also I think there needs to be something in the abdominal area to give a sense of dimension, because right now that area around the the logo looks a bit flat, maybe some subtle shading to show muscles or something?

 

But hey, it's better than I could do, I can't draw for shit. The eyes, teeth and tongue look cool - and the veiny bits. Plus Venom is my favourite Spidey enemy. Oh and I can barely see a difference in the two... the second one has slightly lighter highlights right? I think I prefer the first.

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Looks like a constipated contortionist trying to clear his blockage,

 

Lol! Ever read Spider-man comics? ;)

 

How are they different!?

 

The colouring is different (And Is essentially the main thing I want criticism on, seeing as I know Im not a good enough artist, but I may need to colour) the top one is more blurred.

 

Thanks for the comments fellas, keep em coming. :heh:

 

Oh yeah and I agree it does need to be darker. Ill probably practise on ;

 

A) Not my own work

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B) Stuff thats easier to colour, ie not dark people (to start off with)

 

Ive tried to toy with filters to see what looks the best when colouring. :blank:

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Found you some stuff to practice on :)

http://www.dltk-kids.com/crafts/cartoons/poster/bposterspiderman2.gif'>http://www.dltk-kids.com/crafts/cartoons/poster/bposterspiderman2.gif

http://www.dltk-kids.com/anime/inuyasha/bposterinuyasha.gif'>http://www.dltk-kids.com/anime/inuyasha/bposterinuyasha.gif

http://www.dltk-kids.com/anime/inuyasha/bsangocoloring.gif'>http://www.dltk-kids.com/anime/inuyasha/bsangocoloring.gif

http://www.dltk-kids.com/anime/sailor/65.gif'>http://www.dltk-kids.com/anime/sailor/65.gif

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http://www.dltk-kids.com/

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If you want to practice colouring on lineart without actually doing the lineart, you could start here. They also have lots of coloring tutorials on that site.

 

but make sure the artist doesn't mind (or never finds out...)

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*purses lips*

 

Yeah, before you said it wasn't about the drawing, I was going to criticise that. LOLZSTILLLUVYA.

 

The blotchy effect is a good idea, but in the end just addes to the flatness. Some different colour around the lines of where the musculatrue should be would suit much better.

 

Examples; Extreme musculature

Simpler version, 2 tone

 

I'm of the opinion that Venom should be predominantly black/dark grey with either grey (if he's black) or purple highlights.

 

But yeah, your skill is good, but it's applied wrongly, IMO, to a bad picture of Venom to practice on.

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Hmmm curious.

 

Would've thought you'd be more familiar with that sort of pose then. :confused:

 

Of course, but your rendition of it doesn't look right, inordinately large thigh, torso angle looks unnatural, and one leg looks like it's out of its socket.

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Of course, but your rendition of it doesn't look right, inordinately large thigh, torso angle looks unnatural, and one leg looks like it's out of its socket.

 

Perfectly fair comment.

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