Beast Posted July 30, 2009 Author Posted July 30, 2009 WHHHY ARE WE WAAAAAITING? lol I'll give it one more day....
MoogleViper Posted July 31, 2009 Posted July 31, 2009 Have you pm'd him? I could play him if you want.
Beast Posted July 31, 2009 Author Posted July 31, 2009 Yeah, twice. If he doesn't reply today then I shall give you the position because I can't wait long, people might grow impatient. I'm going to give him five hours starting from 6.42pm (I'll be on about half past 11) and if he hasn't replied by then, MoogleViper shall PM me his vote and then I shall type up what you all have voted. So unless Haggis doesn't post in five hours, then MoogleViper shall take over as Neil.
dwarf Posted July 31, 2009 Posted July 31, 2009 Moogle's in then? I think maybe if you posted in a popular thread in general chit chat you may have got a response but it isn't your fault.
Beast Posted August 1, 2009 Author Posted August 1, 2009 MoogleViper is now Neil and ReZ is now Jennifer. I'm sorry Haggis but I have to advance the game, it's too late. I will type the other part up in a few hours time (I'm in a rush now)
Slaggis Posted August 1, 2009 Posted August 1, 2009 Literally just saw the PM. Sorry for holding people up, totally my fault.
Beast Posted August 2, 2009 Author Posted August 2, 2009 Literally just saw the PM. Sorry for holding people up, totally my fault. It's OK but as I've said before, I sorta gave the position away now...I'm really sorry. You can be in my next game if you like though Back to the games ------ Stacey: "I think Neil should take the key" Kain: "I think Stacey should take the key" Kate: "I think Neil should take the key" Neil: "I think Kain should take the key" Stacey looked at everyone, wondering what would happen. She looked at everyone with shifty eyes and they all did the same. "Well I'm not doing it! It's not my trap!" said Kain. "I saved all your asses, I ain't putting my arm in that!" Stacey shouted. "Well, actually Kain saved me so you didn't save EVERYONE!" snapped Kate. Everyone looked on the floor and then looked at Neil, Neil looked at everyone back. "You can get that idea straight out of your head, I'm not doing it." he said. "OK, give me a good reason why you shouldn't? I mean, you are the one who hasn't done nothing for the group!" shouted Kate. "In case you haven't noticed, bimbo, neither have you!" snapped Neil. Kain looked at Stacey, Stacey looked at Kain. "This is your trap, love." he said. Stacey looked shocked and hurt, she suddenly gave him a sharp look. "If anyone should do it, it's one of the guys! After all, you're the ones who've been either unfaithful or stupid!" snapped Stacey. "Yeah! Girl power and all that shite!" shouted Kate. "You can shut up as well!" said Stacey. "What? I think HE should do it!" Kate said, looking at Neil. "Me too!" Stacey agreed, not looking at Kate. "You're all mad!" said Neil. "Do it, or all of us will make you. Kain, if you want my forgiveness for cheating, then you'll force his arm!" said Stacey. Kain looked down, Neil closed his eyes and nodded. "OK....OK I'll do it" said Neil. He got close to the box and he placed his arm through the hole. He tried to unhook the key but it was tightly tied. He took a deep breath and pulled the key off the string and, as expected, the shotgun fired its bullet. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH" screamed Neil. He put his arm out of the box, half of it was missing. Everyone started to scream. Kate started to cry. "Dude this is FUCKED up!" shouted Kain. Stacey took off her jacket and wrapped it around Neil's wound, trying to cover the leaking blood. Neil looked at the chair, crying his eyes out. Stacey diverted her attention from Neil to the chair. "That chair has two keyholes, right?" asked Stacey. "Yeah, it does" confirmed Kate. "Well, which one do we put the key in?" asked Kain, grabbing the key from the box full of blood and mangled arm. TIME LEFT: 2 MINUTES AND 0 SECONDS TIME TAKEN OFF: 1 MINUTES AND 0 SECONDS Which side? A) Left (connecting AWAY from Jill's box) (1 minute) B) Right (connecting TO Jill's box)(1 minute) ALL PLAYERS (EXCEPT FOR JILL AND JENNIFER) SHOULD PUT THEIR INPUT AND DECIDE ON ONE FINAL ANSWER. THINK CAREFULLY!
dwarf Posted August 2, 2009 Posted August 2, 2009 Well there was that thing right at the start that said the killer would be seen in a different light, and I think Neil the dad was seen in a different light. Well I was suspicious of him for some reason. I would save Jill after putting my hands in boiling water, I wouldn't want that effort to be wasted. Saying that I think you should Save Jennifer.
Beast Posted August 2, 2009 Author Posted August 2, 2009 Guys, when you say 'Save Jennifer', what direction is this referring to? The left or the right?
MoogleViper Posted August 3, 2009 Posted August 3, 2009 Guys, when you say 'Save Jennifer', what direction is this referring to? The left or the right? I'm not sure. That's what we're discussing.
dwarf Posted August 3, 2009 Posted August 3, 2009 I'll read through it all later, probably need to look closely at the trap layout again and then decide, but I'm busy.
MoogleViper Posted August 5, 2009 Posted August 5, 2009 Why save Jennifer? Jill adds so much more. Because I love her. I mean because Jill was a school bully. And all school bullies deserve to die.
Guest Maase Posted August 6, 2009 Posted August 6, 2009 I assume I can't talk? This is so unfair ;__;
Ellmeister Posted August 6, 2009 Posted August 6, 2009 Come on people, its not hard to understand, go for Jennifer's chair or the other chair. It might be reversed though. Its not simply save who you want. NOOBS.
Beast Posted August 11, 2009 Author Posted August 11, 2009 The gang looked at the two keyholes connected to the chair, wondering what to put the key in. “What do we do?” asked Kain. Stacey shot him a puzzled look, her glare tired and warning. Kate was tending to Neil’s wound. Kain looked at Stacey. “I just can’t see a way to know where the key goes!” Kain came to the conclusion. After much thought, Stacey nodded and agreed with her. Stacey looked at the chair and then looked at the gang. “It’s my game, right? So I should be the one to carry the burden, whatever happens! I wanted revenge but never like this. I wished most of you death but they were empty wishes, I never meant it.” Stacey said, crying. “W-w-w-we know, this I-I-I-I-isn’t your fault Stace.” Spat Neil. Whatever happens, one WILL die. “OK, this is MY choice. It’s my game, I have to. I’m so sorry. Jill, Jennifer….forgive me” Stacey cried. She made her way to the right side of the chair, where the wires were connecting to Jill’s box. She put the key in….. She twisted it……………….. Then a noise came from her left. The chair started up and, as predicted, it electrocuted Jennifer. Jennifer’s body started to shake violently, uncontrollable. “Shit. Shit. SHIT!” Stacey cried. “I’m sorry, I’m so sorry!” Jennifer was shaking. Stacey started to cry and she looked at the box where Jill was. Jill was lying very still. She heard a clicking noise. She looked over at the box and the lid started to open. Jill got out. Kain looked at Jill, wondering whether she was OK. “Jill!” Kain said, hugging her. “Jill, we were so worried. How di-AAAAAH!” Kain suddenly screamed. “Kain? Are you OK?” asked Stacey. Kain turned to Stacey, his blood-soaked shirt caught her eye instantly. Stacey looked in horror, she couldn’t believe it. “Sh-she s-s-s-stabbed me!” Kain said. Jill walked forward and she stabbed him again in the back. Kain let out a shriek and Jill pushed him to the ground. “Silly little man!” Stacey looked at Jill, shocked. Kate looked at Jill. “Hey, I know you! You’re her bully. I should have guessed you’re still the little slut!” Kate said. Jill laughed hysterically, ignoring Kate’s remark and looked straight at Stacey. “Did you like it, Stace? Hmmm? Was your ‘revenge’ everything you dreamed off? I mean, come on, you got to give me some credit for thinking of everything here!” Stacey looked at her. “I can’t believe it…you? But how?” Jill started to laugh, “You remember in the papers? Everyone was talking about some guy named Jigsaw and his lessons to teach bad people the wrong they’ve done in life? Well, his partner in crime was Amanda, remember? And what is her second name, Stacey? You, of all people should know!” “Amanda Young?” Stacey said, wondering where she was going with this. “Brownie point for you! OK, now answer me this question, my name is Jill Andrews that much is true but what is my mother’s second name?” she asked. Stacey then gasped, realising what she never thought about. She knew instantly who she really was. “Young!” she whispered. Jill looked at her, laughing. “Yes, Amanda was my aunt. My family threw her out when they found out about her drug addiction but me and her…we never stopped talking. She knew she could trust me to follow in her footsteps. She understood me!” Jill explained. Stacey looked at the box Jill stepped out from. “You risked yourself?” she asked. “No,” Jill said. “Even if Jennifer survived, I would have still been alive but my cover would have been blown so really….you’ve done me a favour. Thanks” Jill smiled a sadistic smile. Stacey felt embarrassed and ashamed. “I can’t believe I even began to trust you!” Stacey cried. Jill gave her a disgusted look. “Trust? Like you know the meaning of the word! You’re not sorry, are you Stace? You’re not sorry for nothing. This is why this game was built entirely around you, this is why this game was made! To make YOU the centre of attention!” Jill laughed. “But what about me, huh Stace? You made up malicious lies about me and then you have the nerve to say I bullied you? Do you EVER wonder why bad things happen to you?” Jill asked. “I didn’t do nothing!” Stacey defended, her words echoing the room. “LIAR!” Jill shouted. “Lies! All of it! Amanda showed me everything! She showed me files about every single person in this room. She TOLD me stories about them! All of their lives, ruined by one person. Everyone in this room has one thing in common…you!” Jill pointed. Stacey started to cry, tears filling her eyes up. Her vision turned blurry. “Those tears…they’re not real. None of them are real!” she shouted. Jill ran forward to Stacey. “See, you’re pathetic Stacey! You spread rumours, you make up stories…you’re poison to us…and now we’ve been tortured long enough from you…” Jill got her gun out and pointed it at Stacey. “…I’m going to be the cure!” Jill laughed. Kate screamed, Neil started going unconscious. Stacey pleaded to Jill, she was begging her. “Please! Don’t do this!” Jill thought for a second. “OK, I’ll tell you what…I have two bullets in this gun. Both was going to be for you but since you’re so scared of death, Kate and Kain will have to beg for their lives because now! Because now, it’s out of you three! Neil looks like he’s about to go at any second.” she said coldly. “You evil, twisted bitch!” Stacey screamed. Jill pointed the gun at Stacey and a wounded Kain and Kate. “Ah, but don’t I just love it!” This is the last part! STACEY, KAIN AND KATE: PLEAD FOR YOUR LIVES! YOU CAN NOT BE A HERO AND ASK JILL TO SHOOT YOU. YOU MUST PLEAD! AFTER YOU HAVE PLEADED, JILL MUST MAKE AWAY TWO LIVES. BUT JILL, BE WARNED, ONE OF THEM IS LIKELY TO STOP YOU IN YOUR PLAN SO CHOOSE CAREFULLY. I hope you've paid attention to the story
Paj! Posted August 11, 2009 Posted August 11, 2009 “You evil, twisted bitch!” Stacey screamed.Jill pointed the gun at Stacey and a wounded Kain and Kate. “Ah, but don’t I just love it!” Best ever. Could be Demi Moore in Charlie's Angels 2: Full Throttle. Anyway... Please Jill, don't do this! You had no need to do all this...we're human, we're not depraved animals, we don't need to do this to each other to prove some shit to ourselves and others! WHAT THE FUCK! Please. I'm sorry for everything. It's not my fault. This crap is all around me, it's not my fault! Please, let us go, spare us and we can forget this...please...?!
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