Paj! Posted June 14, 2009 Posted June 14, 2009 *I wonder why I didn't alternate which hand I used while fishing for the keys? That would have minimised the pain. Oh well* *It would be cliched to choose the one nearest me, or the one nearest Jill. But then I would be actively avoiding cliche by choosing the one near the TV, which to me, is cliche, so it would end up being less cliched for me to just choose the one nearest me, since thinking logically, If time permitted, that's easiest to try, and then if that doesn't work, the next one is right there. If neither of those are right, depending on how far away the TV is, Jill is possibly screwed* - Stacey thought. Stacey grabbed the one nearest her and tried it.
Beast Posted June 14, 2009 Author Posted June 14, 2009 *I wonder why I didn't alternate which hand I used while fishing for the keys? That would have minimised the pain. Oh well* *It would be cliched to choose the one nearest me, or the one nearest Jill. But then I would be actively avoiding cliche by choosing the one near the TV, which to me, is cliche, so it would end up being less cliched for me to just choose the one nearest me, since thinking logically, If time permitted, that's easiest to try, and then if that doesn't work, the next one is right there. If neither of those are right, depending on how far away the TV is, Jill is possibly screwed* - Stacey thought. Stacey grabbed the one nearest her and tried it. Stacey looked at the clock. Only five seconds to go. She looked down at her cut feet and picked up the key near her. Four seconds... Hollering in pain, she went on the way to the keyhole by the clock and tried to put it in, the key dropped to the floor. "Oh my God! MY HANDS!!!" Jill cried Three seconds... She picked up the key and put it in the hole. Two seconds... She twisted it and then. One second... It clicked! She got the right key! Almost straight away, the chains unlocked and Jill was free! Jill ran away from the trap and then... 0 seconds... The chains went straight to either side of the wall. Then the room filled with the puppet's laughter. "Oh my God! Thank you!" Jill hugged Stacey. "Get off me!" Stacey yelled. "I told you, I don't want to be your friend." "OK, OK, geez, just showing my appreciation is all." Jill said sarcastically. Stacey then turned to her and said "I want to search you!" Jill looked confused. "WHAT!" Stacey said "I want to know whether you have any weapons on you!" Jill looked at Stacey with a warning look but agreed. Stacey felt everywhere and couldn't find a thing. "OK, I believe you're not going to kill me!" Stacey said. "Well duh!" Jill said. "Watch your mouth!" Stacey warned. Jill backed down and then they heard a click coming from the door Stacey walked through. The door unlocked. Jill and Stacey looked at each other and went through it and what they saw on the wall surprised them. Forgive Forget <----- ------> Stacey, make your choice: A) Forgive B) Forget C) Let Jill decide (and well done on the decision, lol)
chairdriver Posted June 14, 2009 Posted June 14, 2009 Why is Stacey so solid gold? Destiny's child. With Mystique.
Paj! Posted June 14, 2009 Posted June 14, 2009 Why is Stacey so solid gold? Destiny's child. With Mystique. I love the obvious addition to my Immaculate Face folder in the back. --- ANYWAY --- Hollering in pain I love how I imagined her singing "Holler" by Spice Girls when you said that. ---- I'll forget. I'm so tired of having bad memories thrown back at me.
dwarf Posted June 14, 2009 Posted June 14, 2009 Paj: 1) you would have ran out of time thinking about clichés which don't even exist 2) it was wise using one hand because it gets used to it better and would probably go numb, so dipping 2 would've fookin wrecked 3) stop trying to read into everything like a smartass!
Paj! Posted June 14, 2009 Posted June 14, 2009 Paj:1) you would have ran out of time thinking about clichés which don't even exist 2) it was wise using one hand because it gets used to it better and would probably go numb, so dipping 2 would've fookin wrecked 3) stop trying to read into everything like a smartass! 1) This all goes through my head really quickly, I'm superiorally intellijunt. 2) You could be right there, but I personally wouldn't have done that. Meh. 3) NO! PLOT HOLES MUST BE RIPPPED WIDE OPEN!
dwarf Posted June 14, 2009 Posted June 14, 2009 1) This all goes through my head really quickly, I'm superiorally intellijunt. 2) You could be right there, but I personally wouldn't have done that. Meh. 3) NO! PLOT HOLES MUST BE RIPPPED WIDE OPEN! 1) You spell it intelligent, how ironic 2) Yeah 3) there aren't really any plot holes!
chairdriver Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 To be fair, "intellijunt" was an obvious joke/way to make it seem like he wasn't being serious.
dwarf Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 Wheeeeeeyyyyy got ya! Knew it would provoke someone! Wanted him to fall though.
dwarf Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 Hehe, childish I know but hey, hooked you. Sort of testing how dumb people think I am really.
Beast Posted June 15, 2009 Author Posted June 15, 2009 (edited) Jayseven, you are in play. Both of them looked at the wall, Jill looked surprised at what the wall said. "Why is this guy obsessed with forgiving and forgetting?" Jill wondered. Stacey rolled her eyes and said plainly. "Because I wanted revenge on people like you, people who hurt me and now he's fulfilled my wish but with a price." Jill looked at Stacey darkly. "So you knew about this all along? What is this, some sick plot to make us suffer?" Jill asked her. "Yes, that's exactly what it is." Stacey yelled. "I put my arm in scorching hot water and burned myself so clearly I planned all of this!" Stacey said sarcastically. Jill just sighed. "I'm sorry, I get worked up when I'm scared." Stacey paused "S'alright, I suppose." Stacey looked at the wall and thought about her choices. "I'm going to forget!" Stacey said to Jill. Jill looked at her for a moment but nodded and followed Forget -----> Once they entered the room, Jill was holding the door since the room was dark. "The only way we'll ever get out is if that door shuts." Stacey reassured her. Jill looked at her uncomfortably, she didn't want to go through this horror but she had little choice. She let go off the door, unprepared for what was coming next. Stacey, however, was preparing herself. Once the door was shut, the lights come on. She looked to her left and saw a body wearing a pig’s head in a tank. The body was bashing against the walls of the see-through tank, but it couldn't break through. The tank started to fill up with some black substance slowly. The tank had pictures of a neck covered in bruises. "What could this be?" Jill asked. "I know." Jill said. She ripped off the pictures and ripped them up and threw the pieces on the floor. On the wall, there were three buttons. One was red and said ‘D’ One was blue and said ‘C’ One was orange and said ‘R’ Then, out of nowhere, Stacey and Jill heard that creep’s voice. “Stacey, you are now faced with someone who you’ve had to live with for years and years, he cheated on you constantly. You knew about this and when you confronted him, you were threatened. He tried to kill you by strangling you. You showed the police your marks on your neck where he did so and the police did nothing. Tonight, you could have justice.†At this, Jill gasped. “Yes, this is your boyfriend Kain. Right now he is in a tank which is being filled with tar at the moment. On the wall, there are three buttons. One will make the tar fill up faster, one will add poisonous gas and another is a surprise. However, one will free him and only one. Two buttons will bring him closer to death and one will free him with a consequence. However, you have two chances, after the two chances are used and you fail to free him, then you watch him die. You have two minutes to decide til the tar slowly fills up the tank. You had to choke on his lies for too long, now you can make him choke on his own lies and watch him take responsibility. Remember, not everyone deserves a second chance. Forgive or forget, make your choice.†And with that, the voice had gone. “Stacey? Are you doing this?†Kain asked. “I’m going to kill you if it is!†and with that, he was bashing on the walls more. Stacey looked at the buttons and looked at Jill. “I don’t know, could the letters mean something?†Stacey looked back and tried to think whether there could be a meaning behind it all. TIME LEFT: 2 MINUTES CHANCES LEFT OUT OF 2: 2 So Stacey and Jill, talk together and decide on one: A) D (50 seconds) B) C (50 seconds) C) R (50 seconds) D) Make Kain beg for his life (1 minute)(Jayseven types a plea) Edited June 15, 2009 by Animal
Guest Maase Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 D... C... R... What the hell is this? I'm not sure if we have enough time to ask him to beg for his life or something like that, Stacey, it would take a lot of time and we only have 2 minutes to save him... This of course, if you want to save him... *Jill looks at the buttons* Well, what I can imagine is: D = Die R = Right C = Choke Can't find anything more, and you are the one in the game, so its up to you to choose...
Paj! Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 Well, Jill, that's what I thought, except R is obviously 'Release'. Stacey hurriedly pushes the Orange Button. She doesn't want to watch him die, she decided.
Beast Posted June 15, 2009 Author Posted June 15, 2009 (edited) You both have chosen the orange button…was that the right thing to do?… Stacey looked at Jill, confused of what to do. “Personally, I think all three mean something. Remember what the voice said, one of the buttons will release him at a price.†Stacey remembered what he said. She looked at the buttons. “But I have no clue what they mean!†Stacey cried. “Do you want to save him?†Jill asked. Kain shouted and screamed. “PLEASE, I DON’T WANT TO DIE! HELP ME!†Stacey looked at the buttons again and looked at Jill, who in return gave her an unsure look. “I think I’m going to go with the orange button. I hope this will save him.†Jill brightened up a little, “I hope so, even though he doesn’t deserve a second chance…the bastard!†Stacey just looked at Jill and said “…you don’t understand, I love him†Then she pressed the orange button. Everything paused. She did it! She picked the right button! “YEAH!†Jill smiled. Stacey smiled back. “Oh thank God!†Stacey cried. “Thank you thank you thank you!†cried Kain. But then… They all heard a louder noise. The tar started to fill up the tank faster and the gas started creeping in. “AAAAH! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE! GET ME OUT OF HERE!†cried Kain. Stacey looked at Jill who was just as puzzled as she was. “Shit! That wasn’t the right button?†asked Jill. Stacey looked puzzled, she knew she had one last chance. She knew she had to think hard. The answer was somewhere right in front of her. If only she could remember… TIME LEFT: 1 MINUTE, 10 SECONDS CHANCES LEFT OUT OF 2: 1 So, Stacey and Jill, one chance left to save him, his fate lies in your hands. What do you want to do? A) D (1 minute) B) C (1 minute) C) Ask Kain to decide (1 minute) I advise you to think VERY carefully... Revenge Read back on what Jigsaw and Jill said during the time in Kain's room, they both say something in common...you'll find your answer there. Edited June 15, 2009 by Animal
Guest Maase Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 And the other one would be: "Death" That was smart, lol
jayseven Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 kain slips in the tar, and falls to his knees with his pig-head clotted and poised at an awkward, painful-looking angle. He is but a whimper, certain of his future.
Beast Posted June 15, 2009 Author Posted June 15, 2009 (edited) S.C.G, you will be playing shortly... She knew this was her last chance to save her loved one. Stacey started to cry. “I just don’t know what to do anymore!†Stacey cried. Jill looked at her “Well, you have to do something! Time’s running out for him.†Stacey looked and saw the gas creeping in and the tank filling up. “I’m not sure about D, I feel uneasy about it.†She cried. She pressed the blue button and the tank didn’t change. However, the room started to fill with gas. All she heard was loud hissing. “OH SHIT!†Stacey screamed. Jill covered her mouth and nose. “Cover everything!†Stacey couldn’t hear her and ran and banged on the door. “STACEY! HOLD YOUR BREATH!†Jill screamed. Stacey did as she was told and held her nose and covered her mouth. The tank made a noise and the door swung open, leaving the tar oozing out of the tank and the gas escaping, joining the one in the room. Kain threw off the mask and was barely standing, he managed to crawl to the door while he was choking and spluttering. “OPEN THE FUCKING DOOR!†coughed Kain. Jill started to cry. “Oh my God! I’m going to die in a room. I wanted to die somewhere famous like Hollywood. Why are you doing-“ “Seriously, shut the hell up Jill!†Kain said. Stacey started to collapse to the floor and closed her eyes. She was unconscious. The door they came through clicked. “C’mon, help me!†Kain demanded. He grabbed the left side of Stacey and Jill grabbed the right. They both dragged her out of the room. As soon as they got out, the door slammed shut. Jill and Kain started coughing, gasping for air. “Who’s doing this?†Kain asked. Jill shrugged her shoulders, while choking. Kain looked at the very same wall Stacey and Jill did before they ‘forgot’. Looking confused, Kain turned to Jill. “She was supposed to forget me?†Kain asked, almost recovered. Jill shrugged again, recovering from the gas. “We don’t…know, we just don’t know†Jill said. They both stood up and left Stacey’s unconscious body on the ground. They heard a click coming from ‘Forgive’. “Looks like we’ll have to decide for Stacey!†said Jill. They both picked up her body and dragged her to the Forgive door. Forgive < ---- The room was dark, the only light showing was the one from the doorway. From what they could see, there was a chair near them and a black object on the left side of it. They couldn’t see anymore. They picked Stacey up and dragged her through the door. Kain was holding it open. “Close it, you have to!†Jill instructed him. He did as she said instantly. The lights come on and at the far end of the room, there was a door leading straight on. Both of them looked at the door and in red paint, the door said: KILLER? In the middle of the room, there was a big machine covered up. On the left side of the machine near the ‘killer’ door, there was a person in a mask not moving a muscle. Kain looked at Jill. “Stay here†Jill started to breathe oxygen into Stacey’s mouth and pumping her chest. Kain went cautiously to the still body. He reached his arm out and grabbed the clown mask quickly off the body’s head. “Justin?!†said Kain. Justin was unconscious, he wasn’t moving. Then all of a sudden, they heard a whirring noise coming from the covered object in between both chairs. Kain looked at the covers and it was moving. Kain carefully unveiled it and saw two drills. One was facing far from the motionless body, the other facing far from the empty chair. Justin awoke, screaming. “Wh-wh-what is this?!†he shouted. “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME! GET ME OFF THIS THING!†The voice filled the room again: “Stacey, you now face an awful dilemma. Sitting in front of you is someone who has started lies about you. They called you a slut, a hooker. You didn’t know who started those rumours, well tonight, I can reveal his identity, it was your sister’s boyfriend Justin.†“Come on Stacey!†said Jill Stacey started to come round. “Stacey, are you OK?†Jill asked. Stacey looked dazed but she was fully awake. “Yeah I will be†Jill tried to rush what she said “Justin’s in the trap!†“Justin?†Stacey asked. The voice carried on speaking. “Justin liked you and he wanted to be with you. He offered you a better life, hope for the future but you turned him down for Kain. Bitter, Justin started rumours that you were a hooker. Everyone believed his lies and one night, a stranger attacked you which led to rape. You went to the police but the police did nothing as you couldn’t see his face. The mask he wore was a clown mask.†Instantly, Kain looked at Justin and Justin looked down. “You sick, twisted pervert!†Kain shouted to him, he ran over and punched him round his face. Blood shot out of Justin’s mouth. Jill sat there, gobsmacked. “Out of all the people, I never thought you’d be capable of something like this!†Jill cried. Justin sobbed. “Now Stacey, you will have to face a very hard decision. As you can see in front of you, there is an empty chair. In order to advance, you need to choose one of the people you have saved, you can not choose yourself. As soon as you have selected that person, the person should sit on the empty chair where their arms and legs will be strapped, making them unable to move nothing but their fingers. On the arms of the chair are three buttons. Two on the left arm and one on the right: One makes the opposite drill come a quarter of the way to their face One makes the opposite drill come half way towards their face One makes the opposite drill come three-quarters towards their face There are no tricks to this, simply a battle between two people. Once one of the drills reach the end, the opponent’s chair will unlock and you have to advance with that person. One will live and one will die. Who will you miss like a hole in the head? Jill or Kain, make your choice.†And then the voice went again. Stacey started to cry. “Justin, how could you?!†Justin looked down “I’m sorry, I really am!†Justin cried. “Sorry’s not good enough!†Kain shouted to his face. Justin flinched, scared of what would happen next. Kain looked at Stacey, he looked down at his feet and then his eyes met hers. “Stacey, who are you going to choose?†Jill looked at her, waiting to hear her name, unprepared for the horror she might face. “I don’t know, I just don’t know. I wanted revenge but not like this! Who should I pick?!†Stacey asked. Jill shot Justin a dirty look and said “I don’t know but whoever you pick, I hope either Kain or I survive, this scum of the earth doesn’t deserve life!†Jill and Kain, make a statement as to why you SHOULDN’T go in the chair. You get one chance so make it count. After you have done so, Stacey will PM me your fate after hearing both of you. After she has made the decision, I shall post the next part and PM whoever she has chosen A) Jill B) Kain Make your choice P.S: Sorry for the long post, haha. P.P.S: D was drown (the tank would have filled up with tar) and C was Chance (as Jigsaw said about second chances as did Jill) Edited June 15, 2009 by Animal
dwarf Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 Hmm there are quite a lot of confusing aspects to that post.
Beast Posted June 15, 2009 Author Posted June 15, 2009 Hmm there are quite a lot of confusing aspects to that post. Really? I'll answer any questions you have
Paj! Posted June 15, 2009 Posted June 15, 2009 I just reread bits until they made sense. *awaits pleas for mercy*
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