Posted December 20, 2008 Hello. I do alot of script writing for various web comics Id like to show you my latest comic strips that is a series i invented long ago . I do the writing and colour/lettering . Drawing is by an artist friend of mine Yen Ip . If you want to see more of these or other comics then my devart account is http://rossk.deviantart.com or my drunkduck comic account .http://user.drunkduck.com/Rossk Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 20, 2008 "Well, that's the toilet tent up, where's the actual one." Did you steal that from Bottom? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 20, 2008 *laughs* If I was doing a cartoon strip like that, I would have done the exact same thing, to be honest. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 20, 2008 They weren't particularly funny, but they weren't "bad". I'm not a fan of the art style, either. Personally. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 20, 2008 The art isn't bad, but it has no character. Online comics usually have their own style. This looks like it has been made with no imagination. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 20, 2008 They're not bad. But there is room for improvement. You might want to try a different font though. Comic sans is way to recognizable. The art isn't that bad, but you shouldn't use the sandstone texture in photoshop that obviously, and the gradients a just a little too obvious. For effects like that its best to be slight so it adds the effect but the average person isn't quite going to be able to tell exactly what gives it the effect without a close examination. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 21, 2008 I think they're alright, probably geared towards younger kids. If it's not then... erm... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 21, 2008 I think the style is good, and the bacteria one was very funny. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 26, 2008 Is that Batman thing true? If so, my mind is blown. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 26, 2008 Is that Batman thing true? If so, my mind is blown. Lol, no its not. Heres the song live action being performed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 26, 2008 Lol, no its not. Heres the song live action being performed. You gotta admit they do sound like real people though. *Bastard* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 26, 2008 Lol, no its not. Heres the song live action being performed. FUUUUCK YOOOOOUUUUU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted December 31, 2008 Is that Batman thing true? If so, my mind is blown. I believe it. I've heard people make realistic sounding horse whines with trumpets. This doesn't sound that far off. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites